Hi Colter, sorry for not commenting sooner. I think this is working well and the new speed helps. The section between grabbing the guitar and closing the back door is a bit complicated and light. See if you can simplify it and give the guitar case more weight. I roughed in a path for the head and hips on syncsketch, which should give you a general idea.
Lookin' good, Colter!! I'm especially liking that slip and recovery in the beginning!
ReplyDeleteHi Colter, sorry for not commenting sooner. I think this is working well and the new speed helps. The section between grabbing the guitar and closing the back door is a bit complicated and light. See if you can simplify it and give the guitar case more weight. I roughed in a path for the head and hips on syncsketch, which should give you a general idea.
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