Blocking plus

Hi all!

This round is of making the changes per class on Wed. and adding more breakdowns/information.  I have yet to find a paper rig that I like, and the one I'm trying to make is in the works.  I would def like to add the note of rolling up the paper.  Also, the eye lids are getting out of sync with what I'm doing, so I will be making a pass at that, but anything glaring will help. Other than that, any general or nit-picky notes will be great as I move into spline.

Sync Sketch Link

Thanks! Ellen