So I've been working on the notes from class. One of the major ones being breaking up the body on the "DJ" part (easing in and out). I feel like I've been fussing with it and dont know if I'm doing more harm than good. So an eye on that would be super helpful, as I'm getting frustrated.
I've also added in the dialogue and started on a quick pass at the brows.
Would love any and all feedback! Thanks in advance! Ellen