Shot Update

Hi,

I've been working on the notes from class, mainly the end gesture where he says, "Legally, I'm disowning you."  We had discussed that the move was just a gesture and not necessarily a point at his son offscreen, and that he should lead with his head.

I can't tell if it's looking better than what I had at this point, because I've been staring at it for so long.  I did put it into spline so I could get into offsetting of the arm/hand more easily, so it's definitely looking a little even and floaty at the moment.

I'd appreciate your thoughts to see if I'm still going in the right direction.

Oh, and FYI, I haven't done anything about the notes on his mouth just yet.

Thank you in advance!

Jamie

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c5c57ec9d41547249383550b0b5fa724#69723