I've been working on the notes from class, mainly the end gesture where he says, "Legally, I'm disowning you." We had discussed that the move was just a gesture and not necessarily a point at his son offscreen, and that he should lead with his head.
I can't tell if it's looking better than what I had at this point, because I've been staring at it for so long. I did put it into spline so I could get into offsetting of the arm/hand more easily, so it's definitely looking a little even and floaty at the moment.
I'd appreciate your thoughts to see if I'm still going in the right direction.
Oh, and FYI, I haven't done anything about the notes on his mouth just yet.
Thank you in advance!