Monday, April 4, 2016

Notes Addresed

Hi Victor,

I got around to to all your notes from last class.

I did the transitions and tight up the timing a little bit.

Please let me know what you think.


http://syncsketch.com/playground/e878a0be059541209e88d1cb8c2a3476#74590

Thanks,

Giuliana

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  1. Victor NavoneApril 4, 2016 at 6:38 PM

    Hi Giuliana, this is coming along nicely. Good progress! Some little things that bumped for me:
    In the 2nd half of the shot, the head Ry and Rz seem stuck. Loosen up the head angle some more for some subtle variations
    The half-smile is not wide enough - the screen left corner should move further out. See sketch
    His first look to the pink toothbrush is too low, as if he's looking at toothpaste. Raise his eyeline. See sketch.

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