A private blog for Victor Navone's "Advanced Animation Critique" class at the Animation Collaborative, Winter 2016 session.
Hi Giuliana,This is a complex idea, but it's coming along well. Be sure to add some neck movement whenever the head moves, and tie both the head and neck into the torso. I would try to make his last head pose less straight-at-camera and less symmetrical. Don't forget to add some movement to his screen right arm as well, so it doesn't feel dead. Unless you want a lot of polish notes about fingers on Wednesday, you might try cropping the camera to just the head and neck, and not showing the hands. Fair warning!-v
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