Rough Blockings

Hi Victor,

Here is my very rough blocking of him starting brushing his teeth.

I tried 2 versions because as I was doing the second version I though about him being much more contained brushing his teeth to be more coherent with his current mood. So the second version has no ending, but it will be the same last beat as the others.

This is the first version I showed you last class:

http://syncsketch.com/playground/10f90afa24884da08a07d65c044d9f53#68390


This is the second version where he starts brushing his teeth and I realized he was doing too much with his mouth. (No ending)

http://syncsketch.com/playground/4299489f230a44529fa3040d98f62e2e#68391

This is the third more contained version of him brushing his teeth.

http://syncsketch.com/playground/c58d3a6626754c03a57b67763ee9378e#68392


Please let me know if any of this work, if not to start blocking out the one where he grabs the green toothbrush and then realizes the pink one is there.

Also for the ending I cant decide if he grabs the toothbrush with his hand or not? What would you think it would be best?

Thank you

Giuliana

Blocking Adjustments

Hi Everyone,


Made the major changes from the notes. Moved most of the screen right animation to the screen left arm and adjusted the body, face etc to follow.....Also added in the two suggested glances off screen left. The changes make the shot different but I think its done its job simplifying the shifting arm moves. Hopefully its still working with the same tone as before the changes. Any notes welcome. Thanks!

-jm

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/060766fe7f7a45518b3cabcbc14b1ddd

Blocking Plus

Hello,

I've been working on some of the suggestions from last class, and am moving further into the Blocking Plus stage.  I've mostly worked on the first half when he takes a drink.  I'm playing around with how to make the swallow interesting, so hopefully that's looking a little more fleshed out.

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/6381ee0825a24d92988b10234d67bc51#68271

Thank you for any feedback!

Good luck on your applications! :D

Jamie

Last class?

Hi everyone, quick question... what is the date of the last class?  Thanks and have a great weekend.

Gary

Layout/Rough Blocking

Hi,

Here is my new dialogue shot in its infancy stages!  I decided to go with just the 1 character instead of having the 2nd one in there as an over the shoulder.

I hope things are reading clearly.  Again, this is almost at a layout stage, with a little bit of detail.  I plan to get into the poses even more and really flesh them out.

I've also included my reference that I'm using for inspiration.

Thanks in advance!

Shot:
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/9395ff9a70924ef3a13be9e19da41b14#66901

Reference:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/21928513/Reference1.mov

Jamie

New Shot, VERY rough blocking

Hey all! I hope everyone had a good weekend!

So it took some time for me to figure out the character. I went back and forth about how I wanted to play it.  Alot of the prep work I did doesnt really apply anymore :)

So here is a VERY rough blocking on how I want this to go.  (I do want to add a little shaky cam, but if it wont work or is too cliche, Im fine with leaving it out.)

Thank you in advance! Ellen

syncsketchlink

Polishing Notes

Hi Victor

I hope you all are having a great weekend.

I addressed most of the notes of my head turn, I still have to  work on the settle at the end.
Do you guys have any suggestion to make Malcom looks like he is breathing?

Thank you and I'll continue to work on this plus the notes you give me.

Link:
http://syncsketch.com/playground/24e954980a784d1fbf231c3b562a4e56#66775

Giuliana