tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93978424088988018.post6397757409344484931..comments2016-04-19T15:07:43.939-07:00Comments on Victor's Winter 2016 AnimC Class: PolishyVictor Navonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17953361725259997163noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93978424088988018.post-5738813123760003492016-04-04T18:22:41.558-07:002016-04-04T18:22:41.558-07:00Hi Ellen, this shot is looking great. It's co...Hi Ellen, this shot is looking great. It's come a long way! I'll save the nitpickier stuff for class, but the 2 things that stood out for me:<br />- The head movements from 11-38 are a bit too big, competing with the accent on "DJ". The easiest fix would be to take the pose on 27 and pull the head back to screen left more. See sketch.<br />- The mouth is only closing for 1 frame on "luMBerjack". That MB needs at least 2 frames closed.Victor Navonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17953361725259997163noreply@blogger.com