tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93978424088988018.post5395921031306485714..comments2016-04-19T15:07:43.939-07:00Comments on Victor's Winter 2016 AnimC Class: Polishing UpdateVictor Navonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17953361725259997163noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93978424088988018.post-90073948688680164512016-04-05T12:34:45.166-07:002016-04-05T12:34:45.166-07:00Thank you, Victor! Thank you, Victor! Jamie Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06421091648860210534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93978424088988018.post-49086138685830800122016-04-04T18:32:45.893-07:002016-04-04T18:32:45.893-07:00Hi Jamie, looking really good. The lipsync on &qu...Hi Jamie, looking really good. The lipsync on "I don't think unadopting is the right word" feels a little busy and swimmy. I'd like you to favor the sneering mouth shape on 118 through this section. You could almost hold his mouth in this pose (with slight movement in the jaw for the vowels, tongue for the "th", closed lips for the "p") and just go into and "er" shape on "Right" and "woRD". Hope that makes sense. <br />The blink on 65 feels a bit mechanical. Do the close in 2 frames, and make sure to fast in to the closed shape. Hold closed for 2 frames.<br />The eye direction change at 112 looks weird because the expression is changing too. Try adding a blink here to break it up.<br />The brow change from 166-171 is getting lost in the head move. Move it earlier or later, and make it a bit sharper.<br />Keep going!<br />-vVictor Navonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17953361725259997163noreply@blogger.com